I just finished reading "They Shoot Porn Stars Don't They?" and I really enjoyed it. It's a great piece.
I thought you would want to know that I picked up a mistake on page 8. The sentence "Since business fell off, there are less opportunities for women to get work in the adult movie industry." should read "Since business fell off, there are fewer opportunities for women to get work in the adult movie industry." My girlfriend has made me hyper sensitive to grammar and count nouns.
Anyway, all the best with your future work.